Maximi Animi

First and foremost, grammatical mistakes are miniscule if any. Second of all, consistency of updates and seems like author will not be given up on story anytime soon. It's a unique book and a rare kind to be found on webnovel. Not many book written by a female author with a female protag in a male body. While it feels like a basic fantasy template at first, it isn't any of that sort. While names are similar, magic system and fantasy world is completely unique to the book. I hope to see author and book shine more and improve.

Very Interesting start. I love the author's approach toward cliffhangers. Also, did I mention I love systems, though I don't write them myself. This has a unique approach to the genre, Which I find refreshing. Definitely recommended.

"When life gives you lemons, make lemonade"

The story isin a complex and gritty world. The writing is detailed and insightful. I believe some parts could be clearer and easier to follow thoughThe dialogue is strong, with characters feeling realistic and unique. The way they react to the challenges around them helps the reader understand their personalities and struggles. The pacing is mostly solid, but a few scenes are dragged a LOT. And although the world-building is rich it gets a little overwhelming with all the details, makiug it hard to keep track of everything.It could be a bit more streamlined, but overall, it’s an engaging story with strong potential.

Are u you still doing the part time teacher part time arms dealer arc or is it in the way.

"Akh! You slapped a 14-year-old kid? You must be crazy."

Is this dropped because the author started a new story, so has he completely abandoned this one?

Roman: "Do you still follow your #######?"